On January 15, 1923, writing from Ottawa, a wartime friend replied to Robertson (then working for the Bell Telephone Company in Montreal), having “spent the last few evenings reading over” his paper. He returns it with eight numbered comments; each is set beside the page it speaks to, above.
The letter is signed only “Mel,” but its closing (“kindest regards from Mrs. Melville, the young sapper, and myself”) fixes the surname. This is the Melville who runs through the diary: a Canadian Engineer officer in a field company in 1916, on the staff at Canadian Corps headquarters by December 1917 (where Robertson goes “up to Corps” and “Saw Melville & got leave cheques”), a fixture at the Corps Engineers’ mess through 1918, one of the three who worked the luncheon tent as waiters on Dominion Day, and (six days after the Armistice) the man who showed Robertson round Mons and then visited him in hospital there.
That record matches Brigadier J.L. Melville, C.E. (1888–1980): adjutant to the C.R.E. Canadian Corps Troops and then the Corps’ officer in charge of bridge construction, awarded the Military Cross and a Bar (the Bar for the Canal du Nord bridging) and, after the war, settled in Ottawa and chosen to write the Canadian Engineers’ chapter of the official war history. The “article on the Engineers” he mentions lending Robertson is almost certainly that chapter. No other Melville appears anywhere in the diary or letters; the identification rests on converging detail rather than a document that names him, and is treated here as confirmed on the same basis as the site’s other cross-year identifications.
He ends with an offer: “should you ever have occasion to stay in Ottawa over night, you will always find the odd couch there.”